Poetic penning

A futile, or is it? scream at time to slow down.

A hello to other runners in this human race

A timid whisper through shrouds yet unworn

Some more words of comfort to following friends

Or just an ego seeking solace in achievement.

Reviews

[Zeek4]

Thought provoking piece. My writing is completely ego driven. Like graffiti, I just want to leave a piece of me behind. I fear being forgotten. If that's no ego driven I don't know what is.

[Phibby Venable]

whispers, screams, shouts, hello & ego, i love this!