When the real fire came

This poem is dedicated for the real thunderstorm

When the real fire came to consume

The exact time it looked at both our eyes

You burnt really harsh for saving me

Never knew before the real fire in you

All the teasing all the nonsense

Acts of utter stupidity throughout

All cleansed in that fire for sure

Now I am your love slave for ever

Author's Note

Do you believe this

Reviews

[paul sal.....]

Sometimes love is right in front of you and it takes an incredible event for you to see or notice.....while deep down you've known all along....

[Linda alexander]

Well said, and so true to the deep bottom, really reflected my writing, thanks a lot my friend, take care

[Leyla Hess]

What is fire, and what makes it real?

[Linda alexander]

It can be interpreted in so many ways, in relationships when come to the deepest level you can recognize how much other one cared for you, for example the cartoonist who died in motor vehicle accident , he sensed accident, turned the vehicle will hit him most so that his pregnant wife and the unborn kid may escape, and in reality he died, and she was saved by his act, at times even if people are not too well or strong to care for you they still try with their limitations, which may be way below the normal level to lay man, but all these will open your eyes, reader is boss in my poem, reader can interpret the way fits as far as not totally reciprocal

[Leyla Hess]

Then what can be the "love slave" with whom you identify in the last line? Being a slave implies productivity at the cost of unwillingness, forcefulness, punishment, obligation--surely no love, not even love of god, can be qualified like this?

[Linda alexander]

You can not take in very literal meaning for everything, in literal meaning you are absolutely wright, it is negative, but in the context of the poem above and beyond especially my view as the author, any writing can leave loop holes unfortunatley, at times it may be perceived as the total reciprocal way, it is not rare, it is with every art form, body gestures, conversation, writing, did not mean the love slave as some one ruling you, the love I described beyond layman's, you seemed so brainy, so interpret the way you want, read more, astute observation

[Jack...]

This is definitely love and it is raging out of control. Love your idea here and how it was presented. Very nice.

[Linda alexander]

Thank you very much Jack for the best review, this is from my heart for sure, so I raised my status from oxymoron to a better level after the big fire, basically wisdom after two decades of partnership with thunderstorm, take care

[Jack...]

You are welcome. I don't know Thunderstorm, but you know what they say..."When lightening strikes" :)

[Jack...]

Then he sounds like an amazing and wonderful weather event and may you my friend always be drenched in the rain of his love.

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much Jack, take care

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful poem full of true emotions and fiery love...:)..................

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the best review, really liked your review, take care

[Sami Khalil]

Any time. Welcome...:).......................

[Linda alexander]

Take care.......

[Sami Khalil]

:)........................

[Tina Louise UK]

A beautiful piece hun....giving all to the one you love, enjoyed :) x

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for your best review, wrote it from my heart, take care, Tia, my dear friend

[Scott Metro]

Yes...I can feel your dedication and surrender..
Well done.

Scott

[Linda alexander]

Thank you very much for the positive review, take care

[Scott Metro]

My pleasure.....