Identity crisis

This poem is dedicated to my senior college friend Shinelal Viswambharan. Finding identity gives you more potentials

Are we searching and digging deep 

Is it really sorting out and eliminating

May be meant to meet identity and true self

Can we true yourself and to become a friend

Will you look in to soul and shape it 

Can you marry the true yourself and a strong bond

Can we attain serenity sanity and relax

Can we Fly like a kite to heights

Will we able to your identity and the role

Can we serve the needy with positiveness

May be ponder in to deep positive thoughts

May ride your life with no hurry or worry

Author's Note

Will you

Reviews

[Aethereal]

It was Socrates who said, “Beyond all else know your self.” I feel that I have limitations in this endeavor, and so I see myself in great part as a mystery. I seem to function according to what I must do logically to be a member of a harmonious society that protects and nurtures.

[Linda alexander]

thank you for reading and thank you for the review. This poem itself came as a result of talking to one of my very senior college friend. His vision and thinking style influenced me and he asked me to write about it and he liked it too.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome!

[Anand Sehgal]

All for finding the identity and true self
Find the true yourself and be friendly

Amiable true yourself and shape it
Marry the true yourself and a strong bond

- very deep, figurative lines. Sense of wise unification depicted very well. :)

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[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate your kind words, we loss a lot as we do not know our real roles, at times can not do our meant roles which is way harder too

[Rachelle]

Self-understanding comes with a challenge when one succumbs to messages bombarded by the world. We are all seeking our purpose at some point in our lives but it will eventually lead to living a life for others - for in the faces of others, we see a reflection of ourselves.

[Linda alexander]

Excellent review with true fact, really liked it, thank you so much, take care

[Rachelle]

You, too! ;)

[Sami Khalil]

"Find your identity and the role
Serve the needy with positiveness
Ponder in to deep positive thoughts
Ride your life with no hurry or worry"

[Sami Khalil]

A good positive message. Something to ponder, to dig deep, to relax and attain, to discover our identity. A splendid poem and a good tribute to your friend...:)

[Linda alexander]

Thank you very much for the review Sami, my friend asked me to write about it after he read poem identity, a humble trial, take care mississippe

[Sami Khalil]

Good. You are welcome...:)....................

[Linda alexander]

Take care.........

[Sami Khalil]

:).....................