Was not mistaken

Choices are strange and outcome is even stranger

Simply walked with you all these years

Burnt like ever lit candle and transformed

Something propelled me all along the way

Some one told me I am in right path

You still there not the way I wanted

Not even close to what I worked for

Still core says I was not mistaken

Yes to place you way ahead of me

Author's Note

am confused

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

Still core says I was not mistaken
Yes to place you way ahead of me
-- this very belief keeps us going, helps us to keep the faith intact :)

marvelous thoughts !
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[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the review, at times morons in faith have to be there to balance the materialistic and the smart people, proud to be an oxymoron in our walk of twenty years of partnership, you do not believe my idiocy, but was not mistaken

[alen]

Here I can feel that you have not forgotten the one person who structured your life and gave all your time up for. I'm sure he'll continue to show you along in all your days of life.

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the review, take care

[Sami Khalil]

"Simply walked with you all these years
Burnt like ever lit candle and transformed
Something propelled me all along the way"

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much Mississippe, may be the propelling force may be from God and the love and prayers of others for you, in nutshell it helped and walking continued, take care

[Sami Khalil]

:).........................

[Sami Khalil]

I felt the immense realizations , the terrible weights on you, the burnt candle in the wind of life but midst all of that you stood strong, alive and undefeated. You carried the torch till the end and felt it was still a victory lap. Excellent...Subject and imagery...:).............
Typo: right and not wright...

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the review. Victory and failures all depends on which weighing scale one uses. Take care

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)................