Almighty let your spirits dwell

I believe there is a spirit prevailing in the whole universe which is positive and waiting for our permission to stay with us

Prevail transform and make our hearts supple

Plant the seeds of love everywhere we go

Remove deafness so that we can hear the melodies

Open our eyes to see the spectacular broad vision

Make a strong bond of human hearts to nature

Pour some sensitivity and kindness in our relationships

Help us grow to a marvelous creation of yours

Prevail transform and make our hearts supple

Author's Note

agree or disagree

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

This is the kind of poetry I like to read and which I think is the hardest to write because it motivates persons to keep living instead of the sad poetry which describe lazy people journeys that jumped from a cliff into an abyss because it takes more work to climb.

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the review, you think out of the box which is the most welcome and positive approach, really loved your review

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. An amazing spiritual write with truth and vigor. Your ending summed it up marvelously.

"Help us grow to a marvelous creation of yours
Prevail transform and make our hearts supple"

A beautiful prayer...:)............

[Linda alexander]

Once almighty touches one everything will be transformed. I know for sure that gift is to be granted. I keep praying and at times wander in vague in faith as I lack that gift still keep on bothering for it. Take care

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)...............

[A. Amos]

World need more writes like this one, simply awesome!

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the excellent and positive review, faith is a precious gift and it is purely a gift alone from the Almighty to some special people, take care

[A. Amos]

Such kind of pieces please send me read request:) you're most welcome

[Linda alexander]

Take care, my friend, I will do

[Rachelle]

Uplifting and inspirational!

[Linda alexander]

Thank you very much, take care, hugs dear Rachelle

[alen]

Thank You for sharing, this poem is not specific towards anything It relates to you spirits and how they dwell deep inside your soul.Many things open our souls to bring the spirits closer together

[Linda alexander]

Well said, really liked your review, take care

[Aethereal]

For sure there are spirits both good and bad who change the way we feel for better or worse. We must be in tune with the good ones lest the bad ones get us. I was inspired to write this tiny gift poem for you:

Spirits

There’s no need to brood
when there’s spirits deep inside
who may change your mood
like the moon pulls on a tide.

[Linda alexander]

Fantastic review, your poem is true word by word, our inner spirit is enormous, great saying similar to thathyamasi, aham brahmyam, all points towards the inner spirits and these insights were there more than centuries, still very relevant and deeply believed by millions, so you made the replica of some masterpiece, excellent thinking pattern, so proud of you, keep it up, take care my friend

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! Take care too!

[Linda alexander]

Can I borrow some of your brain just curious, take care

[Bright Ocean Star]

I love this. Especially how you bookended the poem with this beautiful line "Prevail Transform and Make Our Hearts Supple" Very, Very Wonderful work, Linda. Be careful, now. Your poems are gaining in length! (Just kidding). Beautiful sentiment.

[Linda alexander]

Thank you so much for the very positive review, take care my friend, hugs