Isolated island

Was I living happily in the crowd

Did you take me to your isolated island

How can you leave me emotionally

Yes to make me another island 

Do you know I can not be isolated

Yes to live as single human on earth

Can I flee back to my old crowd fast

Why the tied string is stronger than ever

Reviews

[Daydreamer]

Wow! My interpretation:-
An "Isolated Island" is something within you pretty much like an "abandoned interstate"!
Perhaps it's someone who's fallen in love or made a special bond as in friendship with someone who "noticed" them and gave their life a meaning when they least expected! They accepted you in a place where others didn't/wouldn't and you were sufficed with it! And once they left you, that island has built within you! And the feeling demands to be felt! I considered it as something within you rather than an entitlement to your state !
I love the deepness and how this is edgy to talk about!
Great💖

[Linda alexander]

I wrote this based on a relationship for example imagine someone is getting along with everyone and the life itself for a while, same person committing a relationship to another love ship , marriage, friendship whatever it may be, for that commitment he or she has to pay a price to alienate from everything he or she has ( do not take it in literal meaning), sooner that friend becomes a person not capable of sustaining the relationship and it may be or may not be the fault of the person, what may happen to the individual a desert, isolated island, empty glass, drained out, lifeless, what ever reader can compare, really like your review, take care

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Your writes are much different Linda I see you idk what word to use. You speak in a depth and I sense a feel within all something in your life has changed. No matter what it be your a very dear writer and friend sorry I have been away and quite.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot Jonathan for the review and kind words, writing poetry is like using language without knowing grammar and alphabet for me, so far it is going good as some of the reviews reflect, take care

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I like that Linda :)))))))))))))))))) your very welcome:)

[Sami Khalil]

A lovely write indeed. A wonderful and isolated island...Bravo.........

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot mississippe, finally I passed kindergarten in writing, it is a milestone

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.....:)

[Stephen]

Love`s a rein of heart of hearts ~~ it`s up to it either it pulls the seductive hearts to it or unlatched to have some warmth over the blue oceans ... well penned. I`d love to look forward to reading your stuffs.

[Linda alexander]

We need to cultivate love towards everything irrespective of their ability to love you back even to the non living things, otherwise at times one will feel like he or she is stuck totally which is not at all great, but some how even if I aspire for it I am sure am an utter failure, still failure and success is quick as flip of the coin I believe strongly, thanks a lot for your kind words, take care

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, heavy stuff...picking me up out of my crowd, getting me into a relationship which alienates me from my friends, and they you alienate me also...and i wind up all alone on my own island...i want my crowd back...i want to forget you, and move on...like i was before you isolated me in so many ways.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the amazing review as if you hit at the very center of the nail, string seemed like built in even if it is not, you are an astute thinker.