Lost or found

Did I lost or found for sure

Staggering stammering all along the way

Is it the new beginning or the end

Did I really lost or found for sure

One step at a time is crazy as hell

Dreams goals trending towards oblivion

Is the beginning or the end

Did I really lost or found for sure

May be when dirty mud water settle

Can I hope for something good waiting

Is it the new beginning or the end

Did I really lost or found for sure

Reviews

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Another deep poetic will:) I have been here many times. but its like your poem about the path, don't look behind just keep going. Hey I kept on going so much I ran out of roads Linda lol, I made my mind that it wasn't the road that take me it was me had to take me upon it all:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot Jonathan for reflecting so beautifully, well said my friend and so true, I may give you some extra credits for running those roads, take care

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Naw I got emmm all he he:)))))))))))))) your very welcome Linda:))))))))))))))))))))))) my friend:)

[livetowrite]

I've asked myself this many times. You are very good writer

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and the very positive complement, you made my day

[paul sal.....]

Clear eyes see more clearly than cloudy eyes; a new filter for the pond may help.............

[Linda alexander]

Well said, so where I can have clear eyes and new filter, but friend will perception alone can change present and past along with future, if we are capable of doing it, it would have been so easy, we need to grow towards that which is real hard at least I can say on my behalf, really liked your review, take care Paul

[Sami Khalil]

I like the message here. Life can be about losing and or finding, waiting or leaving,climbing or descending into mud...Excellent...:).....................

[Linda alexander]

Well said mississippe, at times in certain situation in life gets confused it was a loss or gain, too complicated the life itself, thinkers make more mess

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting how you used "lost or found" as a verb...the action of losing or finding...when the mud settles, perhaps there will be something good waiting..we can only hope it is the beginning, not the end.

[Linda alexander]

Ultimately hope is the only rope save our souls especially certain times for sure, agreeing with the reviewer, thank you