Thoughts at the corner

What motivates you to breathe

Who motivates you to breathe

Does your soul motivate you to breathe

If that is the case all is well my friend

Author's Note

not applicable to those who can not breathe

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"What motivates you to breathe
Who motivates you to breathe
Is ( Does)your soul motivates ( motivate)you to breathe?
If that is the case all is well my friend"

That is so true and well said. Very powerful...:).......................

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot Sami for the review, if we can aspire ourselves we will be way ahead of the game

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[Linda alexander]

Thanks for the help with grammar thanks a lot misssissippe

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................

[A. Amos]

I truly like the spirit of your poetry, simply amazing!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot friend for the review and kind words, take care

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friends

[Lydia Shutter]

A thought provoking write.....what makes us think about the things we think about? Who or what instigates thought? Best when the inspiration comes from within. I liked this, Linda. lydi**

[Linda alexander]

I knew you will get the essence of it, yes if it comes from within it will stay longer and clearer, but I do not have it, so I wrote a poem to compensate for that, thanks a lot