Crying allowed up to his cross

Did I admit to Jesus in Aramaya and English

Did I confess to Jesus that I can not stop crying

Did he uttered resolutely to cry from Pilate's house to his cross

No more than that no way not even a bit more than that he confirmed

Did I really pass that spot he marked for me

Should I stop crying now or ignore him forever

I uttered silently in the corner of my soul

You are right you have more reasons to cry than me

Author's Note

did you pass the spot marked for you

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Your faith shines through. Bravo....................

[Linda alexander]

This writing is partially based on a message I heard in a speech, it was not at all related to religion or faith, you will laugh at me if you see how strong I am in faith, still trying to be strong in faith and believes, I changed it a little bit from the speech, the message was it is not at all good we moan for ever, thanks a lot for the review

[Sami Khalil]

I understand. You are welcome....:)......

[Linda alexander]

Take care mississippe

[Sami Khalil]

You too Cleopatra...:)...

[A. Amos]

I loved it, such a deep and meaningful write...the message you shared is simply awesome!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the very positive review, I consider this writing as the beginning of my writing, credit partially go to two other persons one is a catholic priest Fr. Bobby Jose, other one a poet on this site Chris G Vallancourt

[A. Amos]

All of you have done a marvelous job and you're most welcome

[Linda alexander]

Take care............

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Awesome read:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the most complementing review, there are millions in this world who have more reasons to cry than each one of us, not forgetting the fact when it comes to our own it may seem like the whole world came down and is justifiable too to a great extent, but when thinking
deep down time for all of us to stop crying is passed already, any one can agree or disagree

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Welcome very true:)

[Wandering Minstrel]

Gorgeous and so ethereally beautiful as each word carries the reader on a soft poetic journey

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and kind words, you made my day partially as you called writing as poetic, trying to believe myself as a poet