Path

Is path really a reality or a myth

Is real path always there for us

Why it has to be obscure and opaque

Are we blind or path is invisible

Are all others on their path already

Are we the few continuing astray

Will we ever find our right path

Will we travelling in the only orbit soon

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we will eventually find our own orbit...there are more than one...it's no myth...the path is where we finally end up through some trial and error.

but there is a real one...and it may seem obscure or opaque...

but if we scrutinize slowly, if we are patient enough...we will find it.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the excellent review, patience is the key as per the review but how long is the question

[Mikayla_Stagg]

I really like the nice flow all of your poetry has. Well written

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, really appreciate your positive and kind words, take care

[Blake Fodor]

Wonderful and rhythmic, love the feeling this piece emotes, excellent!!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and kind words, take care

[Sami Khalil]

"Is path really a reality or a myth
Is real path always there for us"

[Linda alexander]

Those who know their own path is the lucky ones, thanks for reading and reviewing Sami, take care friend

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)....

[Sami Khalil]

Some powerful pondering on the path or paths we all chose individually. Bravo
"Will we ever find our right path
Will we travelling in the only orbit soon"

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review Sami, at times so confused, poet Jacob says there are real paths if we wait, you did not say anything about the existence of real path, with me I am not fully sure, take care

[Sami Khalil]

I agree with him. You are welcome...:)....