Screen play alteration

You know the version and disposition

Yes friend being the director of this live movie

The dialogues have to be changed radically

The tone and the expressions have to be polished

Swap the characters and their roles in your movie

Change the overall style and wording

Alter the screen play if you have no other choice

It is a utter shame not using power being the director

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Yes friend being the director of this live movie
The dialogues have to be changed radically
The tone and the expressions have to be polished"

[Linda alexander]

Thanks Sami for all your support for my writing, especially when I used write horribly in the beginning, take care

[Sami Khalil]

:).....................

[Sami Khalil]

"Swap the characters and their roles in your movie
Change the overall style and wording
Alter the screen play if you have no other choice"

[Linda alexander]

Wow! you came back Sami that means I can write, thanks my friend

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)....................

[Lydia Shutter]

What a great metaphor. It is so true....no one but YOU should be the director of your life. If there are people who bring negativity into your world, fire them. Replace them with better "actors". Very well written and thought out. Lydi**

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and the kind words

[Sami Khalil]

So true and well spoken in a great poetic form. Bravo Linda...:)...............

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review Sami, it is only in writing, am one among many idiots who never change the script of the screen play for unknown reasons even for me so far

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we can change our lines, change our roles when it suits us...
we have that power ...we can rewrite our script of life...all we have to do is take the pages and redo them...

clever poem, Linda.

nice metaphor here.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, so glad you agree with poem, take care