Pursuit for roots

Why can not we grow and blossom

Is the growing a real hassle

Why we can not advance like mighty oak

Is the xylem and phloem too weak

Do we need strong roots to grow

Do roots have role in our dream seeds to fly

Pursuit for roots really matters in mid way

Can the roots grow well in displaced soil

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Pertinent questions in an unsettled world when the answer is really so simple - accept and love one another for who they are, and be thankful for that which we have, rather than be filled envy for that which we do not have. Your thoughts are insightful and appealing to me!!

[Linda alexander]

Well said and so true, thanks for the review, take care

[B.J]

People around the world, need to read this. Your work made me think of a lot of things that are happening around the world today. Great insight into a troubled world. Well Penned.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and kind words, take care

[B.J]

you're most welcome

[closed]

This is really well written. Looks like you put a lot into this

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and kind words, have to grow even if no water and nutrients so we should forget about the strong roots for now

[Prabha Salimath]

Sow your feet and stand still is my law in achieving anything. This is poem imparts that msg. Without roots nothing can stay strong., it may be until the time is in our hand.
Nicely penned I liked it.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, time is a big factor in general and patience may be the key too, tomorrow is the another new horizon, so glad you liked it

[Prabha Salimath]

I agree with you Linda.

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

strong roots really do make it easier---and they aren't always there...but we do what we can to grow strong, given whatever circumstances.

jacob

[Linda alexander]

So true, do the best and simply grow, thanks for the review

[Sami Khalil]

Roots keep us rooted in truth and firm grounds. It has to be watered and nurtured though. An excellent write...:).....

[Linda alexander]

Well said, take care

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:..........................

[Lydia Shutter]

We do need strong roots and the soil we grow in has to be nurturing. Your metaphor is good and asks a good question. I liked it. Lydi**

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, I agree with you, take care friend

[Mikayla_Stagg]

Short poem but very beautiful. These few words say a lot. Thank you for sharing.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks again for review and kind words, some how I have hard time to write long poems, may get there eventually

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it s very beautifull. words just lying there and make nice imaginery and conection .

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and kind words, take care