Who really passes

Time will pass yes it will go 

It will fade for sure to create memories 

May be like mighty oak with stories

Solely like short lived butterfly

It won't wait for you if lived or merely passed

You can choose simply adhering to your core

Are you really blind to see the inner bliss

Are you simply fighting for loosing battles

Never ever say farewell without dancing

Please listen to your each breath and pulse

You may figure out for whom you sweating

Simply walk, simply walk, simply walk calmly

 

Reviews

[Prabha Salimath]

Value of time exhibited nicely Linda I liked it.

" Never ever say farewell without
dancing
Please listen to your each breath
and pulse
You may figure out for whom you
sweating
Simply walk, simply walk, simply walk
calmly. "

Time use it and try it but don't waste it.

[Linda alexander]

Leaving the stage without dancing is really a huge loss, thanks a lot for the review, take care

[Prabha Salimath]

You are welome friend.

[B.J]

Absolutely beautiful. Amazing poetry.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks again for your visit and the appreciation of my writing, take care

[B.J]

I am enjoying your work

[Sami Khalil]

"adhering to your core
Are you really blind to see the inner bliss
Are you simply fighting for loosing battles"

[Linda alexander]

Thanks, take care

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:) :-)''''

[paul sal.....]

Time IS fleeting, it is best to hold on to all that passes or it may pass you by, breath in life and all it's colors!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the best and apt review, holding breath and it's beautiful colors is the essence, take care dear friend

[Sami Khalil]

I like all the aspects of this poem. You are becoming a star of poetry...:)......................

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for your time to read and review, really appreciate, take care mississippe

[Sami Khalil]

The river is raging with praise. You are welcome...:)......

[Lydia Shutter]

Make the most of every day...carpe diem! Yes, we need to dance and enjoy our lives....our loved ones. We need to make memories. No one knows what tomorrow brings. Well writeen, Linda. Lydi**

[Linda alexander]

Gracias for the review and kind words, take care

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I love this poem....

especially "never say farewell without dancing"

walk calmly through life and make the most of it.

[Linda alexander]

When we are calm there is more chances we may say hello to inner bliss which is most calm inner peace, the soul of the people meditating for ten twelve years mainly seeking this inner bliss, therefore we the lay man can attain that inner bliss and it will enable us to do life dance with inner calmness, so glad you liked this poem, take care dear friend

[Mary Bosworth]

amazing and powerful poem...worthy of much praise!

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, you so generous in in your ind words, really appreciate it