Beautiful lifeless tree

Look there's my beautiful tree

Well watered and nourished all year along

It was even waving the branches to welcome me

When I touched it was a lifeless tree 

It invited me to become lifeless too

I became lifeless just to join the tree

Look there's my beautiful lifeless tree

I stand near my tree as a lifeless human tree

Author's Note

Try to be alive even if you live in a partially dead skeletal world

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

Your poetry expresses how even one can be full of fruits (fruitful days) & .. be so lone around fruitless nights at the same time... standing under the shadow of blueberry tree; lying (on) beneath the bliss of starring (twinkling) moon.. by the edge of river... on the bank of wet grass with memories. Beautiful imagery you've come up with.

One typo: "there is my beautiful tree" .. replace "there is" with "there's".

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for your review and kind words, I can not believe myself how much this site helped me, take care

[Adam Adams]

You're welcome.
Btw, same typo's also found in first line. You must correct it ;)

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

A sad way to live and view the world.
Trees are something to cherish, as life is too.
They give life through their existence.
You showed your views through your words
with the relations.

[Linda alexander]

Well said, life is to cherish in every sense but in broader sense life is to celebrate which is possible only if we can raise our bench mark of living above the average perceptions of the world irrespective of which ground we all stand, thanks a lot for the visit and the great review, take care

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[Basit Majeed]

theme is good but could have been much better...

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the visit and review, this is way better than my beginning writing, I grew mainly because of mt favorite readers and reviewers

[Basit Majeed]

ua always welcome ..:)

[Sami Khalil]

A great analogy in this poem. Lifeless tree and lifeless humans sharing a lifeless world. Your poetry has a great meaning...:)..................

[Linda alexander]

Thanks for the visit and the review, take care

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Take care...:).......

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow this is something like how a relationship can be so inviting, yet suck us dry---destroy us...

and we become emotional skeletons...
love the allegory here.

j.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review and visit, hope you are doing good, take care