Nothing Static for ever

Nothing static

Nothing static the physique later food for fire or worms

The memories opening doors to senile or Alzheimer

The sorrows die down in the longest walks of life

The joy and happiness already in the brim of fading

I can see true spirits thriving over endless perils

A sarcastic smile covers all at every disappointments

Wow! for a moment I forgot  life is for all

Wow! for a moment I believed everything is for me

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Being able to read your words, being able to open the mind and respond to your poem is proof enough that sharing and empathising is what matters. Tragically there are so many more people who CAN'T share their wretchedness or haven't the facilities to do so than those who put a penny in a charity tin and think they've made a contribution as they wander off to the pub, hair salon or whatever!.

Your poem has true content and meaning, thanks so much for sharing.

[Linda alexander]

Your review is a great complement to my writing, a bunch of writers helped me a lot to get better in writing, thanks for the visit and review

[paul sal.....]

Others aren't as fortunate as us , and we're not as fortunate as others, fate and luck are the culprits

[Linda alexander]

Wow! well said and so true, very sharp review, take care

[jacob erin-cilberto]

fantastic theme ....we will fade in mind and body------the important thing is whether we have given enough of ourselves to others before this all happens...while we still have the wherewithal...

j.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the visit and review, special thanks for the words fantastic theme, take care