Squares

Square is the only shape we need

It is the best shape we have ever seen

Put all squares together and exclude all

Square is not a shape just an illusion

Author's Note

shape up for good not to become squares of society

Reviews

[Gee]

Yep, they try to box us, expect us to fit into their expectations and conform as they wish......how boring would that be.
Interesting write Linda A

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the review, not only it is boring it is dangerous, the young generation at any level even in family if one person little out of the center the pressure itself can make him or her to go further deeper and they may end up depressed, committing suicide, eating disorder, unless they become to threat to them self and others just be supportive and patient with them, why we analyzing people as if we are splitting hair, leave people as they are, they might have plenty of reasons the way they are now, so if we can not help do not at least hurt them more.

[Sami Khalil]

I feel you are using squares as an analogy of how we compartmentalize our thoughts and judgments in square shapes and not other ones. We don't think outside the box so to speak. Powerful and intellectual.

[Linda alexander]

Yes, also we as society has common mentality of wishing all world citizens should be within the frame the society imposes and it is all over the world too. This will pressurize people a lot and they think they are not fit for this world especially young generation, This must be changed to make world better, ideal perception is the starting point, just like shape of the hip is not circle but different in each individual, so we must think all hip circles are circles not only the circle of a perfect shaped bangle. Thanks for the review Sami

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no we need to be hip circles!

cool poem.
lots said in a few words, and lots left to the imagination.

[Linda alexander]

Exactly review seems more clearer than my writing thanks a lot