A negative art

The water in the pond was almost pristine 

There were few algae but  way balanced

I saw few of us mixed chemicals in the water

It is so sad same few now trying to purify water

They used strainer strategy and modified osmosis

There were stratification process using coal and sand

I saw water purification technology tailored for all

I saw some one still confused where we lost our track

Author's Note

Creating issues and then trying to solve not cool strategy

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh my, a really strong metaphor use here to describe a decline in WC...many leaving lately, poetry that has lost its real voice...a sad time indeed.
the mixed chemicals not mixing too well...explosions and PTSD...
j.