Cold

This is only some feelings I pulled together, that ends with this.

I am cold

You hold me tight and controlled

When I feel like ice

You give me advice            

To breathe

 

When I will freeze

Then you give me a squeeze

after you get on your knees

and begging me please

stay with me everyday

Your arms are around me like an ocean surrounding you everywhere

Like the air you can feel like a body care

Even when it rains you cover me with an umbrella

I don’t know maybe I am dreaming

Maybe the dream will come true

Well, can it be a clue?

Wondering if there one day will come a perfect man

Who would take my hand.

 

Author's Note

Please comment, or if something sounds strange or weird let me know.

Reviews

[Amanda Lee/ Isolated Dr..]

"but me you tight can hold" sounds a little strange to me! I'm all about rearranging words for lyrics and poetry but that one sounded off :)
"Your arms ARE around me" (it should be)

I love the line "even when it rains you cover me with an umbrella"