Poison

of hypocrites and thieves

she sings of
traitors,

murderers

and thieves

she sings of

liars,

of unforgivable

deeds

she sings of

poison,

and of slow

painful death

"be careful,"
I warn her
"you sing

of yourself."

Reviews

[zainul]

A great shock for the hypocrite singer,but a soothing comfort for the honest people.
Lovely write.

[Alm]

:O ghasp. That was an amazing dramatic end to a wonderful pem. I thought of a gypsy for some odd reason. Methinks the flow was very nice. I love the lines that go, "of unforgivable deeds." Assonance is wonderful and constant. :D


-Alm

[Kate]

thank you, Alyssa! :D

[Alm]

:)

[Legolas]

Such a wonderfully written poem. I love it. Im putting it into my library;)

[Kate]

I'm glad. :D haha, thank you! :)

[Autumn]

Very superb poem! You are definitely talented at it. Original structure that put strenth to it.

[Kate]

thank you very much! :D