make me weak

make me weak

A Poem by Alicia

those kisses make me weak...
like the time
  
I took those muscle relaxers in second period
and when I feel you touch me...
I melt...

like crayons
in a back seat
on
a hot
day

© 2008 Alicia


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Great use of metaphors, the crayons on the back seat was a great visual!
Being kissed makes us feel so many emotions, but I like the fun in this, and the warmth in writing it.

Posted 17 Years Ago

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 Added on August 29, 2008

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Alicia
Alicia

houston, TX



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23. graduated with a BA in english from sam houston state may 2007. currently working a mindless job that has nothing to do with my major, but gives me lots of time to think. desk goddess during the w.. more..