Cowardly Drummer Boy

He hits a snare drum poorly for cheap; rates amazon products, as sheep boys are known to do.

But he's such a cowardly punk....  a 50 year old cowardly punk

Age makes a coward? No, some cowards just age

Session drum beater without hope of a future not in a casket

The thorn of your crown in your shadow avatars

Psycho babbled inane as genuine as a three dollar bill

You wanna play at my daughters sweet 16?

I need a washed up musician desperate for meaning

Be careful who you confide in; I'm not your only friend

But I do pay the help quite well

Imagination on a whim....

You're a f*****g moron dude.

Reviews

[barrywatkins]

Punchy writing this. I expect vanity publishing is just silly.

[Davidgeo]

You already left a review like this with one of your other profiles. Remember when I told you that you shouldn't be a liar all the time because you're too stupid to keep all your lies straight? Yeah... well, I told you so.

[Chris]

I paused to give a listen to a new voice. I did see you had a number of views with no comments - which isn't very fair... soooo

You have a strong, knowledgeable voice, and yet exhibit a disdainful 'tude. Is it you WANT to force a reaction - some sort of in-your-face intent? I get the descriptiveness and even the anger.

[Davidgeo]

No one is actually a writer here are they? You should be aware that some people can write far outside themselves. Generally what I write is not that personal. You take your own meaning from it, don't worry about me. Unless you're my dad.... are you my dad?

[Davidgeo]

Also, don't give reviews for dumb reasons.... "a lot of views with no reviews, not fair!!!" Ugh, you're pathetic. Silence would be preferable from you ya dumb a*s dick wad.

[Chris]

Some are writers, some even made or make money at it. As for giving a comment - I give an honest view that may be only my incorrect take of your intent - but at least you KNOW I took the time to read it and then took the time to think on what YOU had to say. I don't have to like it but I respect your right to your voice and for you to know if a reader/listener actually understood what you wanted to speak about. Anyway, welcome to WC.

[Davidgeo]

You self indulge, you just prattle on to prattle on. Go jerk off in your own bathroom. By the way, self publishing does not make one a writer.

[Chris]

Chuckling here... who self-publishes? Though I do know a few that have, even went to a few book signings. And of course I self-indulge - why bother elsewise?

[Davidgeo]

And now you're openly lying.... the only people who publish (not to include journals) are completely self published. Are you going to pretend that you never see Lulu ads or any of that other BS? I've been here a couple months and I see that s**t daily. You're a pud and a hack... seriously, stop talking to me. I want nothing to do with you

[Chris]

The ads here are set in a data base and positioned by the owner of the site - he gets revenue for each one displayed. The "cookies" and tags on your own device is what selects which ad is displayed and how often. Seeing an ad doesn't mean you or any particular person uses THAT service. Just sayin'.

[Davidgeo]

So you're dumb as s**t... You think ads randomly appear? Demographics? Hits? Connected revenue? Jesus Christ... you go against obvious logic to defend shallow vanity authors? Ah.... your a vanity press writer aren't ya? Ha.... loser.

[olivesandhummus]

I liked the description, and the first five lines. I suggest adding punctuation to make it flow more naturally, but that's personal choice. The ending was a bit weird, but I loved the second line. You could make this a really good piece with a bit of work.

Goodluck with your future writing!

[Davidgeo]

Are you a gorgeous red haired women with absurdly pale but perfect skin by any chance? You forgot my penis outside your vagina if you are.

[olivesandhummus]

i have never wanted to stab myself in the eye with a toothpick more.

[Davidgeo]

Go bigger, perhaps a salad fork... if you're going to stab yourself in eye don't be a cat shirt wearing p***y about it.

You really do have lovely skin.

[olivesandhummus]

yes. I will take your advice in mind. Perhaps a fire poker would do.

[Davidgeo]

Are you really "Olivia Emily"? You know me if you are...

[olivesandhummus]

you obviously don't know me if you think i have red hair

[Davidgeo]

Ha... you've been dying that s**t for years you brunette little hooker dog. you totally gave me herpes, too bad I already had em though!! Ha! Jokes on you Em. I do miss your vagina, you always were so f*****g delicious. (I'm pretty sure you're not her... fun to remember anyway! Cathartic)

[Davidgeo]

You are using a stupid little pet name of hers as your avatar though.

[olivesandhummus]

i'm sure i was, darling.

[Davidgeo]

If you can tell me who gave who herpes.... then, I will know for sure if your the same Emily.

[olivesandhummus]

eh. i'm not her. you probably gave her herpes, though. you seem like the type.

[Davidgeo]

I'm just f****n with you lady face. I had nor do I have any idea who you are.

[Davidgeo]

And she gave me herpes... for your information

[olivesandhummus]

cute:))))))