Nationlized Fool's Gold

.wave your flag dipshib, you're already out of your mind.

the closer you get the less you need the question,

that is shared realization

it exists only in the mind;

away from the tension between failures and desires,

what is the cause of negation

that exists only between like minds;

transcending the fear of the interlopers, the strangers,

that is shared admiration

it exists only in the minds.

Everything resides in our minds... Every single f*****g thing.

the further you get the more you need to question,

this the world without trust

it exists only among the unrealized;

further from the familiar mentions and motivations,

what is the cause behind the forsaken

this exists only between like fears;

transcending an entire nation of nothing into bigots and b******s

that is proper nationalization

it exists only outside the mind

Reviews

[Nick Dahlburg]

You have a way of conveying a message that always amazes me, really, your peoms are awesome :)

[Davidgeo]

Ain't you a sweetheart then.

[Nick Dahlburg]

I wouldn't call myself a sweetheart, I'm just telling you the truth. Your poems are great and encouragement is important.

[Nick Dahlburg]

Also, the title description or whatever it is, don't wanna nit pick but I don't think you meant for it to say dipshib.

[Nick Dahlburg]

Just returning a favor because you pointed out something I misspelled.

[Davidgeo]

Grazie. I wouldn't have it any other way.

[Davidgeo]

It's how I swear without fugging swearing asphole. fuggin shib holmes.

[Davidgeo]

By the way, sir.

[Nick Dahlburg]

Sorry, I had so idea '•~•

[Davidgeo]

Now you're .2% more clever.

[Nick Dahlburg]

Indeed I am, anyways thank you for your suggestions, and I'll keep reading your poems whenever I'm on, I gotta run.