Only Mostly

Only mostly. Everybody has something or another unpalatable to the other...

It's not very difficult to survive though

A person would think otherwise

Given all the moralizing from the moral folk

And taken

The uncertainty

Of the discourses of the germiness of germ

Doctors

In this tepid reality

Warmed by reaction

Feeding mostly, breeding in between

Forgetful commonality

And jokes plentiful

Without enough moral madmen

Syncope of culture doesn't happen

Correctly

In the stead

Replaced and wild

A discourse between the unconscious

In a fight with a backlash

A kind of finding

Tell me now...

Who am I

In relation to you?

With 'Instinct and Health'

"It really isn't so dangerous to be alive"

(Woods Hutchinson)

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

Nicely crafted...one drawing their own conclusions. For me it's very relatable and I dig that. R xo

[Payton ThaProphet]

Cryptic and nicely written. It allows the reader to find conclusions instead of forcing one

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very interesting poem :) good job loved this piece

[Davidgeo]

Thank you lauren...

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

You're welcome

[Marina]

Indeed quite original. I really like the choice of your vocabulary, makes it all the more interesting to read!

[Jenny Leigh]

Very unique. Felt like I was sitting in at a poetry slam, in a coffee house. I liked it.

[Davidgeo]

If only I had a better voice I'd be a rap star

[Jenny Leigh]

:D Never give up the dream.