Planes Through Space-Time

in a place

where only maybe lives

on the day before forever

there is only ever tomorrow

　

in a place

where only assuredly roams

on the day after the ending

there is only ever yesterday

　

in a place

where only who really knows?

on the day presently passing

there is only anything goes

Author's Note

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

I want to be in a place where time is like play-dough in my hands. And where money and power and beauty don't matter. Only simple happiness matters. Every moment is treasured, thanked and revisited.

Thanks for sharing your thought-provoking poetry.

Never stop writing!

~Aysha.

[Davidgeo]

Sometimes I get real high and watch youtube videos about astrophysics and stuff like this comes out. The last one I watched was from a channel called "space time". There so much of that s**t out there now, it's awesome but, consumes way too much of my time sometimes.

[John the Baptist]

If there is anything linking the three stanzas, it is the feeling of uncertainty. Our need for something we can grasp is continually frustrated. The repetition of the word "only" seems to be a warning against complacency, in the same way as "always" and ''never."

[Davidgeo]

You almost always seem to read me with more understanding than almost anybody. I do appreciate that.

[Margie F]

Twisted.

This was a brain teaser for me.

A challenge to connect the dots.

What I get is "you may live tomorrow," "in the end there are no tomorrows, only yesterdays," but "today anything goes." So live your life for TODAY. I don't know if that was the intended message, but after untwisting my brain, that is what I got from it.

[Davidgeo]

It's just a convoluted way to talk about time.

[Shep]

pure poetry my friend as the emotion truly speaks as the words fill you with happy memories.

[Wild Rose]

- Its a very complex thought
If it has all gone what is their - who will know?
there will be no one here to tell us

[KWP]

that, I must say, at the end of the day, messed with my head - I can't think about it too much otherwise my head will hurt.

Goodbye Keith Flint - may your day last long into my menu trippy nights I shared with you in the background somewhere :)

[Wild Rose]

Not surprised it messed with your head - Its a very complex thought
If it has all gone what is their - who will know there will be no one here to tell us

I will post this as my comment nearest I can get to understand

[KWP]

and everything everywhere in this everywhen is happening right now, there was never a yesterday and even though the future is uncertain it will only happen now