Bad Well

Bad Well

A Poem by Davidgeo
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die well
or it's like you never lived
live well
or it's like it never mattered
burn true
or it's like your fire was cancer
and please do
keep your sense of humor
. . .to make it all feel,
so much less depraved
and more palatable,
during the inevitable slaughter. . .
it will be the only thing

© 2019 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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This little poem has my mind wandering all over the place. I am thinking of my Mum who has lived well but is not dying well. Wouldn't it be nice if we could do both? I am not sure what your thinking is here, but I would say that a sense of humour both in life and approaching death is a considerable asset.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

The key to all this is levity. We always at every point have the capacity to either laugh or cry. .. read more
HOSPIDIO

6 Years Ago

Hello, this is Silente... You left me dozens upon dozens of the same reviews when I had to leave for.. read more
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Get lost kid. Nobody cares.



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Hello, this is Silente... You left me dozens upon dozens of the same reviews when I had to leave for a year, mate... Saying if I came back you would not block me, and you would own up to, and have a public conversation...

You have rescinded on that. Which is fine, but now you attempt to go against your own word...? You block me, make multiple profiles... I get it, you are angry... I am not going to argue the validation, since I was a f*****g c**t to you...

But at least give me a chance to apologize, eh?

Because I DO apologize
I also ask for your forgiveness...

Not for defending people, I mean I can not ever say sorry for that... But in HOW I did it, and how f*****g ridiculous of a level I sunk...
Totally not me, and is probably a reflection of how I was taking things in my personal life at the time...
No... IT WAS a reflection...
IT WAS ME...
No excuse on my part

I would like to offer peace, however if you feel you still need to lash out at, or attack me...
That is your prerogative, and you are probably owed a bit of steam... I hope at some point you un-block me and I am able to further make amends, or read and enjoy your insights in writing without having to make another account in order to do so...

Again, all up to you. You do not owe me or anyone a thing...

You do you

I am not going to bother you or push the subject
You are free to do w/e you would like to me, mate

Good to see you are alive and still kicking

P.S... She knows all my writing, a moot point to talk about more of it with her : /

Perhaps keep your reviews within the same bounds you deem others to stay within when it comes to courtesy in critique...?

If you wanna attack me, I am right here...
No need to involve others hard-work right?
You CAN, I mean, and i am sure will continue to do so...
Just...
I am an open target...!
Pretttty hard to misss...
I guess a target begging is not as fun as a target moving...
Aha

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

speaking a language of our times you do, and so w/o regret

Posted 6 Years Ago


This little poem has my mind wandering all over the place. I am thinking of my Mum who has lived well but is not dying well. Wouldn't it be nice if we could do both? I am not sure what your thinking is here, but I would say that a sense of humour both in life and approaching death is a considerable asset.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

The key to all this is levity. We always at every point have the capacity to either laugh or cry. .. read more
HOSPIDIO

6 Years Ago

Hello, this is Silente... You left me dozens upon dozens of the same reviews when I had to leave for.. read more
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Get lost kid. Nobody cares.

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Added on July 2, 2019
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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