Real But Not Really

this seems too random
make it faker

that felt too tragic
so make it, happier

this feels too wet
now make it dryer

that felt to hot
please make it cooler

this feels too good
make me more miserable

that hurt too much
next time, make it softer

this feels too fake
now, make it realer
but please never too much 

please,
always, just enough
to make it all seem, random

but not chaotic

difficult

but not impossible

real

but not really

Reviews

[kitty]

This is a form of escapism, I find. We try always to adjust and re adjust to make situations real and suitable to today's expectations of life. In the end we have to accept the inevitable no matter how harsh it may seem while still looking for 'the ideal'!

[Davidgeo]

The first sentence of your review made me chuckle. "...escapism, I find." ha.

Thanks for your review and the chuckle.

[kitty]

Glad to have brought a smile to your face. Have a good day.

[Bonnie Hines]

captures a truly interesting changing condition of being human.