Some Infinities Are Bigger Than Others

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Some infinities are bigger than others
Some live's are more lively than others
Some enemies are more enemy than others
Some water's are wetter than others
Some friend's are more friendly than others
Some talent's are worth more than others
Some hell's are hotter than others

Some time's are more timely than others

Some broke is more broken than others

Some dead is deader than others

Some ending's end more than others

Sometimes it goes on forever. . . 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Apollos]

So first of all, I got to give you props for putting pictures on all your poems. I’m new to the community and you’re the first I’ve seen also do that.

Enjoyed the poem! I’d be curious to what your personal definition of an “infinity” would be.

Haven’t heard anything about Him for a long time lol. What’s your favorite song from them?

[Davidgeo]

You're asking the wrong questions.

It's far more simply not that simple.

[KWP]

:D

indeed!

[Apollos]

So what are the right questions?

[Davidgeo]

That's the right question.

[Gaurav]

your words truly paints a new picture of the universe...i would love to see you further expand the notion behind infinity..great write

[Himaya Ka]

Great realization! But what matters most is, to whatever state we are, we need to learn to be content.

[Davidgeo]

That is a privilege only a small percentage of the world's population will ever experience. It's easy to say, "we need to learn..." to do this or that based on whatever belief system you've internalized. But out in real world, those are questions only people with a lot of time on their hands really ponder. Always from a place of privilege comes judgement, I do not respect those tendencies. .

[R J Askew]

Interesting. And some, if n when they do get time to think, don’t know how to or can’t face it.

[K]

With what I'm going through right now, this hits hard.

[Ksenia Kazantseva]

I really enjoyed this. The repetition put a lot of emphasis on the plot of the poem

[Davidgeo]

Normally I hate repetition. But replication, reproduction and repetition are basically the same thing which means, we don't exist without any of them. Normally I try to avoid the format I used for this poem but it was simply too fitting to avoid.

Thanks for your review, it makes me happy to know people enjoy my work sometimes.

[sonnie ibadah]

very thought provoking. i love it!

[KWP]

this actually make sme think of what our conversation was just now ... it's all passing time ... I'm still gonna write that damn poem :D X

[Davidgeo]

mind and body strong grasshopper. the word passing, it exists because of time. I'm supposed to be a dead person.