Them/Us

simple.

if you love me

you wont let go

before a world full of shadows

an entire world full of monster's

it is, you or me

we choose

between us and them

the thing's we choose

it is, you and me.

simple.

this or that...

this time, that I can

I will break, everything.

  Try and stop me.

make a choice

p***y.

Author's Note

www.youtube.com/watch?v=96a6es1fUjU

Reviews

[pinhead07]

Nicely written. Those that truly love one never let go. The world is full of monsters, indeed. Doesn’t matter though when one is with one’s soulmate. Hope he makes the wise choice.
"an entire world full of monster's" Should be "monsters."
"the thing's we choose" Should be "the thing."
Other than that, you're good :))

[sonnie ibadah]

"...if you love me
you wont let go..." This captured my emotions from the start. Nicely written!

[Davidgeo]

I like how you look closer. This was meant to abuse your emotions. I'm not good at being a real writer.

[sonnie ibadah]

How i see it, in every relationship, abusive relationship or not, we all have that selfish part inside of us when it comes to love. We all believe we deserve to be loved and accepted. We expect them (the ones who love us) not to let us go even if our actions hurt them or we grow apart.
PS; if your words can resonate with someone then you are a 'real writer'

[Neville]

the world is full of monsters... it is very much an us or them existence but hey, thanks for enlightening me my friend... now I can see for yards :)

[Davidgeo]

You clearly don't smoke enough grass.