naked

skinned

you should make best friends with you

before the ends

if only because 

the ride is very long

space is f*****g wide

and we are not going to go

anywhere far in time

it's you and you

time and space

the music

raw

until you can't forget

poetry is stupid

but it's not half bad

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Are you following me???

If that's your cat, it's coat is striking, and poetry is never stupid.

[Davidgeo]

You're objectively creepy.

Have you ever heard of a band called the pixies?
read moreYou're objectively creepy.

Have you ever heard of a band called the pixies?

I don't think you could deal my cat in real time.

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased you think I'm creepy and I don't know pixies.

[Davidgeo]

Oh that's criminal you don't know of the pixies. Have you ever seen a movie called fight club?

[Chris Shaw]

Nope, but I'll check it out.

[Davidgeo]

That's objectively one of the ten greatest movies of all time.

[Davidgeo]

(it's all about the music doll face.... everything I do is about Music. Can you hear me? Don't worry that is irrelevant. In the music.... it's all about the music doll face

[R.J Calzonetti]

Powerful words, I feel that. You say a lot in a little. Thanks for sharing. I would troll you, but honestly, I don't how to properly. See you in the next poem, I'll swing by.

[Davidgeo]

It's hard to troll a troll. You forgot a word.