Teabag

Teabag

A Poem by Davidgeo
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spill it out over this
spread it all around 
let it return
allow it back in again
soak it in
spill it out
stain the waters
over and over again

© 2024 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo



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I'll admit, the title drew me. And no matter how you read it, it reads well. But I'm leaning towards a metaphoric stain on society or maybe on one's heart after being exposed to something undesirable that taints our views and feelings.
Cheers. 🍵

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Year Ago

It's better to read it as a natural stain on existence, not always in a bad way or good way or anywa.. read more



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This can be taken literally or metaphorically and in either case it is a delight to read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'll admit, the title drew me. And no matter how you read it, it reads well. But I'm leaning towards a metaphoric stain on society or maybe on one's heart after being exposed to something undesirable that taints our views and feelings.
Cheers. 🍵

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Year Ago

It's better to read it as a natural stain on existence, not always in a bad way or good way or anywa.. read more
I stayed with the relaxation music far longer than the time spent on your poem. I tried to think of the tea bag as a metaphor, all I got was a shopping list. Out of tea, buy more. How many times can you use one tea bag. It gets weaker, weaker and weaker. I guess life can drain you like that at times.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Year Ago

You should listen to the tool video underneath the turtle. I love turtles and relaxation but, Tool .. read more
Davidgeo

1 Year Ago

Why did you close your profile Chris? I already miss you.
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thanks for noticing and for that kind thought. Just a short break, back now.

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Added on May 10, 2024
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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