The Similar Place

under the sun with me

the flowers grow

we people burn

slowly very quietly

sometimes purposeless

we die together

from the ashes

we grow again

with purpose

from the sun again

we burn

we burn again

Author's Note

Reviews

[alexAlexander]

I enjoyed this one because it reminds us that we are under the sun.

[R.J Calzonetti]

This poem feels powerful, I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

[Davidgeo]

I was fairly hammered when I wrote this one. I'm pretty sure I don't remember what I was talking about. It's new to me!! Hell Yeah Brother!!!