Self Inflicted

Self Inflicted

A Poem by Davidgeo
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divinity

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from the body
pain is an illusion
upon the mind
 how it pleases
so deeply to release...
the body into the mind
sacred lovers deeply entwined
a delusion of space
a dream
sometimes,
a nightmare
expectations... i don't mind

© 2025 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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I'm not very good at giving feedback, but it's like I can feel the weight of the words, if that makes sense?
And how each line continues from one after the other feels like its all adding onto that weight - It was quite powerful!

I absolutely loved reading it and just felt I had to say something. Keep writing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I'm not very good at giving feedback, but it's like I can feel the weight of the words, if that makes sense?
And how each line continues from one after the other feels like its all adding onto that weight - It was quite powerful!

I absolutely loved reading it and just felt I had to say something. Keep writing!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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