Face

animal, mostly human

if you can't take the pain

you will never get the pleasure

this is all rock n' roll

our violin concerto

beautifully composed

in symphony

perfectly arranged

from f*****g rocks

common squabbles

murder

poor decisions

from generational jealousy

this music came to be

so beautiful

our picture now

so perfectly

from something ugly

we find our beautiful today

Author's Note

; ) i love the music

Reviews

[redd Brick Keshner]

A raw and redemptive,
a jagged lullaby wrapped
in grit and grace.
Confronting primal origins
of beauty, tracing how chaos,
trauma, and history's rough edges
are not just background noise,
but the very instruments
in life’s symphony.
Pain isn’t just a prelude to joy—
it’s part of the composition.

This poem, insistent:
what is beautiful isn’t
in spite of the brokenness,
but because of it.

That’s where its power hits hardest—
where rock and roll meets requiem,
and we stand, animal, mostly human,
made whole through noise and nerve.

[Davidgeo]

That's a better way of putting than the actual poem

[redd Brick Keshner]

But I love the minimalism and punch of your poem!

[ETERNITY]

"Snacks=Mom" lolsss
Kick a*s bass.
Hi Dave W. ...Yeah! I'll research Clowncore. Thanks guys. I love music.
youtu.be/pB-vtKpuOkg?si=gLWWwwJ19JNzHodR

[Dave W.]

I love Louis Cole, that song is so good. He is also ina band called Clowncore.

[Davidgeo]

Louis does well in tight spaces.