Alive to See

the same thing differently

the current is terrifying

at times

the direction seems overwhelming

this time 

the river is just flowing

like the last time

you were not living

like the next time

you will not be living

as the river bends unexpectedly

as the current flows very violently

to our sediment... into the sea

this is all rather friendly

Author's Note

Reviews

[Fishysua]

I’m sorry, you seem to be hurting
The repetition is well incorporated and painful
“Like the next time” isn’t clear from context
Thank you for sharing something that is clearly difficult

[Davidgeo]

Everyone's hurting in someway. Don't be sorry.