Golden Brown

the violent extremes

from great distances

into softness so sweet

hellfire becomes sunlight

mellowed by the void

this violence resolves

into chilling reflections

of violent explosions

calmly contemplating

all the extremes 

Author's Note

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

All of the feelings juxtaposed here...a short piece filled with explosions that rock the reader...we need to be securely tucked in when reading.
j.

[Davidgeo]

Surf the sunshine... try not to worry too much about the deeper currents. I sleep better that way. Thank you for your review Jacob. You're a kind human.

[Dave W.]

You are such a good poet, like a gem with so many facets, this side and that, truely I love all your work in all its forms and iterations. So many names yet one heart, one soul, all shines through in your writing.

[Davidgeo]

That's, you're too nice to me... what's your angle David?

[Davidgeo]

And what do you mean about "many names"? I don't have many names here. I might have a few people pretending otherwise... but... I really am just one profile, one person... I use my real name (if you ask) I do not hide my identity in anyway shape or form.

[Dave W.]

No angle, I just appreciate ya.

[Davidgeo]

Well thank you sir, I appreciate you