heavy water

heavy water

A Poem by Davidgeo
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"i don't know what it's about really..." - waylon j

"
time is painful
to the broken mind
the rain is heavy
upon the bad umbrella


 

© 2025 Davidgeo


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This poem is short but very deep. The way it connects time with pain and the rain with a broken umbrella is really powerful. It shows how hard things feel when your mind is not okay. The words are simple, but the meaning is strong and emotional. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing this.



Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This poem is short but very deep. The way it connects time with pain and the rain with a broken umbrella is really powerful. It shows how hard things feel when your mind is not okay. The words are simple, but the meaning is strong and emotional. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing this.



Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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