Fisting

Fisting

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

our brain

"
Inside my hand
lies a fist
inside my mind
lies the kingdom
, out here i am lost
in there i am found
  in the in between
my precious
 unreconcilable 
where there is violence
unexplained
conflict without war
i find my place
... mostly empty
it looks the same

© 2025 Davidgeo


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I think you wrote it so you could use the word Fisting.
Watch a lot of porn, eh?
Yeah, me, too, lol.
Seriously, we all lock away the different world inside our minds.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hillary Hahn's playing in "The Village" was beautiful.

I think we have the ability to create foxholes in our brains and through inner theater, or negative dialog, we forget there's no enemy out there. It's in us.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Months Ago

Be careful with your foxholes. The brain is a treacherous thing

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Added on July 26, 2025
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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