This one had me at the word mathematics - this is impressive work that feels like proof and philosophy molded into just over 15 lines.
Your equation is incomplete though. You've given us 1 + 1 = 2, but what you're really describing is a transformation function where human existence maps onto itself through recursive operations and discrete mathematics - the gap between n and n+1 that contains all of infinity.
This poem is like a closed loop in mathematics itself - a system that returns to its initial conditions, acknowledging that we exist within the equation rather than controlling it. We're variables, not the mathematician.
Posted 5 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Months Ago
I'm not writing about the transformation function.
5 Months Ago
Thank you for the clarification, I did enjoy reading it.
I can see that though, if I had been thinking it at the time I would have definitely leaned harder i.. read moreI can see that though, if I had been thinking it at the time I would have definitely leaned harder in that direction.
This one had me at the word mathematics - this is impressive work that feels like proof and philosophy molded into just over 15 lines.
Your equation is incomplete though. You've given us 1 + 1 = 2, but what you're really describing is a transformation function where human existence maps onto itself through recursive operations and discrete mathematics - the gap between n and n+1 that contains all of infinity.
This poem is like a closed loop in mathematics itself - a system that returns to its initial conditions, acknowledging that we exist within the equation rather than controlling it. We're variables, not the mathematician.
Posted 5 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
5 Months Ago
I'm not writing about the transformation function.
5 Months Ago
Thank you for the clarification, I did enjoy reading it.
I can see that though, if I had been thinking it at the time I would have definitely leaned harder i.. read moreI can see that though, if I had been thinking it at the time I would have definitely leaned harder in that direction.