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cortisol bathing

cortisol bathing

A Poem by Davidgeo
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when you are the creature
all you see are people
making light of your darkness
hunting your pain
consuming the flames
stealing your soul
to mount upon a wall

© 2025 Davidgeo


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A soothing, warm bath, she wraps you tightly in a warm blanket. She stands guard over you until morning. Your soul belongs to her, no one else. Depression is gone for the moment. F**k their walls, they will remain empty.

David, am I close? Cortisol bathing. Randall...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Month Ago

Close enough. I wouldn't call that blanket warm though. It gets pretty hot.



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David, this is the tightest work i have seen from you. the monster snarl. “Cortisol bathing”
Super stress test rip the soul out of my chest
And hang it on that trophy-wall pairing it with motorhead that’s the perfect voice.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Month Ago

Thank you Dale. I didn't pair this one with motorhead though. Ha... that would change the tone a.. read more
Dale Pavolko

1 Month Ago


I thought I saw a Motörhead posted there.
What was I reading with Motörhead? Youâ.. read more
Davidgeo

1 Month Ago

I post Motorhead on my profile frequently. Lemmy is spectacular. You probably just saw my main pa.. read more
A soothing, warm bath, she wraps you tightly in a warm blanket. She stands guard over you until morning. Your soul belongs to her, no one else. Depression is gone for the moment. F**k their walls, they will remain empty.

David, am I close? Cortisol bathing. Randall...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

1 Month Ago

Close enough. I wouldn't call that blanket warm though. It gets pretty hot.

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Added on December 6, 2025
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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