velvet carpet

velvet carpet

A Poem by Davidgeo
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it'll end up like this (how did it end up like this?)

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velvet the touch
moist on my lips
at first it is bliss
and then again
the sunshine
we get used too
over and over
again and again
the day turns to night
the cold robs the warmth
and of course
what was rich
now becomes poor
and here comes the head
it now meets the floor
just like before
human the touch
moist from the blood
our warmth through the night
in lieu of sunshine

© 2025 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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The Killers omg it's been a while since I listened to them!
Your poem, it starts out so sexy,
then true to form,
ends up in a mangled, bloody heap.
It's yummy!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ETERNITY

3 Weeks Ago

I did a good response though, right?
Davidgeo

3 Weeks Ago

Whatever you do is fine if you are pleased with it the next day.
Davidgeo

3 Weeks Ago

according to jesus i went to hell a long time ago so now I just smoke grass and act like a honey tra.. read more

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Added on December 13, 2025
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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