rock paw

rock paw

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

a bunch of hands on a rock flying 'round a universe

"
from a rock
once ambiguous
into the hand
gripped the axe
specifically, on that day
then, light shone upon the land
and some did see the industry
that day,
some saw the mystery
some saw nothing at all
others engaged very brutally
into violent tragedy
alongside our precious
enough survived 
industry persisted 
almost magically,
claiming our part
the human hand
our precious earth
around a fireball
running round a galaxy
within infinity 

© 2025 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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I really like this..makes me think human hands giving meaning to all that infinite circling our rock has been doing for eternity.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

2 Weeks Ago

It's all about the hands man. Thank you for the review. Happy holidays by the way.
BuzzyB

2 Weeks Ago

Thnks. Same to you too. :)

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Added on December 23, 2025
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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