to the other

cheers

the softness

exists between the verse

the nuance

it lies between the truth

the object

it is beyond the words

and the sentiment

we can only speak

this is our curse

how does it feel?

we can't be sure

Author's Note

Reviews

[ETERNITY]

You always make me question our friendship.
What the hell is wrong with you?
Don't you see I like you a lot.
Or maybe you really don't give a f**k.
Just like you always leave me feeling.
Like you always leave me UN feeling.

[Davidgeo]

United Nations feeling?

[ETERNITY]

yeah
.........

[Davidgeo]

I should be a nicer person, I understand. My baseline is not good. I will try harder in the future.

[ThreeWrites]

F**k that geo, you be you. Tell me off or something, I like that s**t. Makes me feel alive! That United Nations comment was funny too. I’ll give you some rage bait, trump gave 2 billion to UN relief fund. Told them to figure it out pretty much. 😆

[Davidgeo]

I'm glad we're all having a good time here.

[ETERNITY]

F**k that f*g bait. Was I talking to you b***h?

[ETERNITY]

I appreciate you trying to give a f**k about our friendship Davidgeo. If that f****r wants a piece of you, and obviously he does, don't use my post. Just f**k him.

[ETERNITY]

hehehe that was a good one...patting my back

[Davidgeo]

She seemed a little edgy for my taste... you know I like 'em aged to perfection.

[ETERNITY]

WTF...are you drunk on that wine? hehehe I like beer

[Davidgeo]

Super tuscany.. gajia wine. Good stuff let me tell ya sister

[ETERNITY]

sounds like fun...you sound like a partier...I'm kinda mellow

[ThreeWrites]

Excuse me miss, but I’d just like to apologize for earlier, I thought that this was geo’s poem. I don’t know too much of what he writes, and saw a couple friends talking on it. Honest mistake. Afraid I can’t do more than apologize. If you want, you can just scold me some more, I earned it.

[ETERNITY]

OH! THREE WRITES! THE STORYMASTER! Listen, Davidgeo and I are just recently starting to be friends. I get defensive where he's concerned. That's all.

[Davidgeo]

We should all two of us make a videotape of this three-way. I think only one person here actually understands how weird they really are.

[ETERNITY]

I'd love to see you naked.

[Davidgeo]

You say that.. but I bet you are scared to show your face irl. Here's a pro tip, darling, don't try and pretend with the real thing. It's dangerous.

[ETERNITY]

I don't care. I want to see you.

[Davidgeo]

You need to be more careful. If only as an example. Stop the f****n' madness my dear.

[Davidgeo]

Also, I assume you're divya playing games. I'm tired of the suicide setup. I just want to write poetry. Please stay away from me.

[ETERNITY]

okey dokey