floater

the tip i see it clearly

the surface is my mirror

below i cannot know 

these waters are too cold

Author's Note

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I find sometimes that looking deep into a mirror, I don't like what I see. But it is not the physical, it is what haunts me inside.

[Soren]

This is a haunting write where reflection prevents vision. So short but so pregnant with meaning. Very nicely written

[Davidgeo]

I make an effort to impregnate my words. I love them words... I want them all to have my babies.

[Soren]

Good luck and best wishes

[ThisSiteSucks]

you have an amazing mind, your taste in music is exceptional.
I posted 3 Tool songs tonight.

[Davidgeo]

are you f****n' with me here?

[ThisSiteSucks]

not fu*kin with you

[Davidgeo]

Thanks mang. Appreciate it.

[Davidgeo]

(that song is awesome though am I right?)

[Davidgeo]

1994... not looking it up, I think that song is from 1994

[Davidgeo]

(1993, i was close)

[ThisSiteSucks]

Davidgeo, I read your stuff all the time. Why don't you ever write about love?

[Davidgeo]

Music isn't this good in 2026

[Davidgeo]

These times do not deserve love. We are approaching a time of widespread panic and chaos. Be careful out there lover.

[ThisSiteSucks]

you have so much passion in you...
let it out

[Davidgeo]

Passion? Is that what we are calling it now? Sure... I got a bunch of that stuff. You need some passion baby? I got passion for days

[ThisSiteSucks]

Davidgeo, surprise me...don't shock me....surprise me, Davidgeo

[Davidgeo]

I don't think anything I do here is shocking at this point. I'm pretty tame. The f**k are you talking about?

[ThisSiteSucks]

Write a love poem

[Davidgeo]

I write love poems all the time man. This is technically a love poem. You just don't know how to read me. I'm writing about love constantly.

[ThisSiteSucks]

heat you wrote gave me something

[ThisSiteSucks]

the last two lines of Taco Bell Wizard is cryptic and sexy

[ThisSiteSucks]

yeah "the waters are too cold"
..I know what that means for a man

[Davidgeo]

Oh really?

[Davidgeo]

What do you think that means for a man?

[ThisSiteSucks]

the tip I see clearly...
but below I can not know..
these waters are too cold..
.it's an iceberg or a mermaid

[ThisSiteSucks]

cold waters for a man can be debilitating

[Davidgeo]

I'm glad you mentioned Taco Bell Wizard.

[Davidgeo]

We all have our seven layer burrito situations of doom and catastrophe... but only some of us can find the fire sauce inside to rise again after the disaster. The human spirit is indestructible if you know how to use it.

[ThisSiteSucks]

I want to see you in love

[ThisSiteSucks]

Davidgeo, are you a real person? Are you a girl? Are you a guy?

[Davidgeo]

Negative. I am a, meat popsicle.

[ThisSiteSucks]

I watched Madeline

[Davidgeo]

Madeline Stowe... from the movie Last of the Mohicans. It's a good movie. Excellent soundtrack. And of course, Danny D Lewis.

[ThisSiteSucks]

your poems are all about movies

[ThisSiteSucks]

Do you have a real life

[Davidgeo]

Part time, I have an extremely real life. How do you think I grasp the fact that society is mentally collapsing? You f****n' people... prepare yourselves. 2026 is going to be an interesting year.

[ThisSiteSucks]

I don't do real life. Screw it. Its going to happen whatever. I'm living my fantasy. Try it.

[ThisSiteSucks]

Davidgeo, you watch movies. I watch this. I am in love https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=15bP5toQhfo&t=238s

[Davidgeo]

When I say "you people" i mean that from the underneath. You're not wrong asking me if I live a "real life"... I really don't. No one really does but, there is still a baseline we all must adhere to. The reality is non negotiable, how you get to interpret said reality is up to us. This place is a playground when you're happy. When you're not? It's a f*****g hellscape.

[Davidgeo]

(even though I'm a swamp creature, i can still you off mate!!)

[ThisSiteSucks]

I doubt it

[Davidgeo]

It'll be a dirty box vs swamp creature party.

[ThisSiteSucks]

I'm at Youtube