heat

the meat screams 

sometimes it sings

the sensation it burns

sometimes

sometimes it is orgasmic

the sensation

by the mouthful

anyway you can take it

oh what a feast

the heat

Author's Note

Reviews

[ETERNITY]

Yeah, this was close
I love the cryptic lust
It's not love
But I guess it could be

[Davidgeo]

Have you ever seen the move Heat? Bobby Denaro and Al "dunka" Cino put on quite a show.

[Davidgeo]

(movie... i meant movie not move...

[Davidgeo]

This poem needs the reader to have seen that movie. Also a movie called collateral. To put it simply, I wrote this for Michael Mann fans.

[ETERNITY]

opinions of the readers are like fingerprints

[ETERNITY]

Davidgeo "the sensation by the mouthful"

[ETERNITY]

sometimes it's orgasmic

[Davidgeo]

You need to watch Heat and Collateral in either order, I recommend Heat first. And then, you need to watch or rewatch Last of the Mohicans. Dude, I don't think you fully appreciate Michael Mann. That man is an American treasure.

[Davidgeo]

last of the mohicans Madeline Stowe still gives me orgasmic memories to this day.

[Davidgeo]

(love poem stuff)

[ETERNITY]

Have you ever loved anybody?

[ETERNITY]

Desperately impossible love?

[Davidgeo]

This conversation has run it's course

[ETERNITY]

Madeline ???

[ETERNITY]

you say I don't know you but you won't let me

[ETERNITY]

Are you afraid I do know you

[ETERNITY]

Davidgeo you are an extreme spinoff of somebody pretty close to normal

[Davidgeo]

No, because it's just going to turn into JO material. Probably because you do know me. It's no secret I'm a filthy swamp creature. You go watch Tom Cruise argue with Jamie Fox for two hours with the movie Collateral.... then I will talk to you.

[ETERNITY]

I don't watch others lives...what a waste of MY life...Like your poem said, "At Death the final thought, Was that life"

[ETERNITY]

I don't need you for JO material...I have my brain and a great imagination

[Davidgeo]

Your brain and imagination was born from others. Do not be so quick to write us off.

[ETERNITY]

When I fantasize about you, I don't think of the picture you sent which was a lie.

[ETERNITY]

I get a vibe of who you are and I go with that

[Davidgeo]

I apologize for busting your balls though man, I abuse the gift I was borrowed sometimes. You once described my interaction as a verbal, something... you are right. I am a bad person for taking the goodness in a cunty way. I will feed the cats for free now.

[ETERNITY]

To me, you wear this bandana...kinda like Rambo

[ETERNITY]

Davidgeo, I guess we're done. Thanks, it was truly great.

[Davidgeo]

You still owe me an apology.

[ETERNITY]

Davidgeo, you remember that? You like me. You freaking like me. Good.

[ETERNITY]

nah, no apology. You know I did not do or say anything to hurt you. Not on purpose.

[Davidgeo]

Man I'm just f*****g around with you... apologies? Come on man... you don't need to apologize to me for anything. I would actually think you were somehow insulting me if you did.

[Davidgeo]

Not many people understand how to deal with swamp creatures. I can help you. I am fully a swamp creature.

[ETERNITY]

I did like the stupid music because i'm drawn to stupidity