Tea Break

A Poem by indu

..traveling time

Trains passing between times

stopped for a tea break.

Saw a chai wala but his tea pot was empty.

Trains started moving out weeping 'choo choo choooooo'.

Nosing for the next tea break.

© 2010 indu

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Louise

Lovely!
Short, simple and beautiful!
I love the imagery you used too...

Posted 15 Years Ago

JENY	Hope that this time… Tea pot will not be empty… Nice work…. Pithy and short..I liked it… Posted 15 Years Ago Hope that this time… Tea pot will not be empty… Nice work…. Pithy and short..I liked it… Rating /100

José Humilde

Nice. Short and sweet. Keeps my attention. I like the imagery. I think my favorite part would have to be about the train weeing its "choo choo." :)

Thanks for sharing! :)

-JH

Posted 15 Years Ago

DeadToTheWorld

this was very well written :) i loved it i too love tea preferably tea from china or japan

Posted 15 Years Ago

Ed Hart

how wonderful, thanks for the journey, and the tea break

Posted 15 Years Ago

PadfootBlack

A lovely poem. Simple, yet enjoyable.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Author

indu

Cochin, India

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I have always felt the urge to write.. but I am uncertain about the texture, technics etc. (if there are any). I have written poems much more than prose though I am not a big fan of poems.. Fact i.. more..