Im hoping

i keep rewriting over the same page hoping and hoping

what's underneath will disappear 

every day i hold my hand

be the one i crave to have 

while everyone is used to projecting their problems upon me 

how can you get rid of the negative people in your life

when you wouldn't have anyone

if you did

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Wow. This was breathtaking, a sucker punch. It just felt so true and honest and that it can just be so difficult to be honest even in your own work, but the emotions here are palpable and intense, and written so, so well! This is going in my favorites, and hopefully I’ll see this published one day! It’s amazing!

[amanda]

Oh my, thank you so much! that means a lot :))

[Light and ashes]

You and I are the same. I am far from sixteen now, but still we are the same. I recently had to cut out my own parents, because I realized they were making all of my problems worse.

[amanda]

It sucks because of all people, those are supposed to be rock solid.

[Light and ashes]

Absolutely.