Eyes to the Soul

the first time I saw you it was-- enticing, to say the least

A cigar stuck between your lips

Your hands on my hips, remembering our first kiss

The first day we ever looked in the same direction
Forgetting our imperfections, to see our true reflections

In the eyes of our soul.

Author's Note

enjoy<33
what can I change, put in or take out
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Reviews

[J.A.Bentley]

The rhyme danced like two lovers.Lovely.

[aliyah]

thank you very much!!❤

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Woah, this is awesome! I really loved this, all of it, the rhyming even was perfect. Please keep writing and posting because this is great. (: I wouldn't change anything or take anything out, honestly. You're definitely a great writer.

[aliyah]

THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR THIS COMMENT! I APOLOGIZE FOR THE LATE RESPONSE BUT THIS MADE MY NIGHT! IF YOU DO WANT MORE HOWEVER YOU CAN CHECK OUT MY WATTPAD! I HAVE EVEN MORE STORIES THERE! MY WATTPAD NAME IS: butterflyxpoetry :)) https://www.wattpad.com/user/butterflyxpoetry

[Vertigo Cat1111]

My pleasure! I’ll definitely check it out!