True Friends

dedicated to my sister Jazz and my friend Ella. The pic is of Jazz.

When ever you feel alone

Remember I am at your side

My friendship is more than a loan

When you're weak, strength, I'll provide

Whenever you feel sad

I'm here for you

To make you glad

Whenever you have no clue

I'm here to point the way

Because I'm your friend

I'll be with you day by day

Our fellowship will never end

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

Nicely worded writing with a clear message Rhyming schemm pretty good but alwaya a but
Your varying line lengths display a lack of meter Meter is the essential of poetry which makes it when read aloud flow like warm honey