Sky

Why is the sky so beautiful?

It is so imense, nobody nows it's limits

Always full of dreams, the sky is

A human following a dream 

is like the sky full of stars

Many stars reprensent our dreams

In the day the sky is alone, 

Only the clouds acompanied him through the day

When it is night time

The sky is a party the last until morning

The sky is so high,

But even human have conquer the sky

The sky in peace watches us in the day

and in the night, it gives us a wonderful View of the cosmos

Reviews

[Magnus]

This is a plain beautiful description of a beautiful thing as the sky! I am sensing you may listen to coldplay there is a line in there that reminded me of coldplay - sky full of stars even though your line is in another context! Keep this up!

[Lizardo]

Thank you a lot! you know, i am a HUGE fan of Coldplay! it's my favorite band. thank you alot, really nice comment.

[Magnus]

You're welcome! And thanx for the request! Am humbled always!

[Laura Lynn]

my favorite line, one is "The sky is a party the last until morning" ...reprensent, is a dialectic way of saying something, this is really sparse yet very , I don't know, I can't find even a word that describes such is the trouble I have with the sound of language which does not seem half pretty enough for itself

[Lizardo]

Thank you a lot! i came up with it, because, at night, i always grabe like at least half and hour to go watch the stars, and i do the same in the morning, i wake up early because i go running all of the days, and always star at stars until they are gone. it is always party up there with many lights.

[Jamie]

Very good poem and an excellent read!

[Lizardo]

Thank you! i really appriciete it