Ignis

The fire the runs on our heart

never stops from lighting the way

To our home

Fire is the lighthouse of men

Since the Dawn of time

The orange,yellow,red spark

The spark that runs through our veins

and lets us become with grace

The fire stops, the world stops

But fire can work in both ways

Its either for good or for bad

But our burning heart knows to differ it

The fire the our heart has, is the brightest of all

Reviews

[Laura Lynn]

I never thought about fire so much, it is rad

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

REALLY COOL COMPARISON. I REALLY LIKED HOW YOU OUTLINED THAT FIRE CAN BE BOTH AN ENEMY AND A FRIEND. I ALSO REALLY LIKED HOW YOU ASSOCIATED FIRE WITH BLOOD. THUS, IMPLYING THAT FIRE IS ESSENSIAL TO LIFE AS WE KNOW IT.

NOTE: IN THE FIRST LINE I THINK YOU MEANT TO SAY "THE FIRE "THAT" RUNS THROUGH OUR HEART".

I ALSO REALLY LIKED THE NAME THAT YOU HAVE GIVEN TO THIS PIECE.

[Lizardo]

Thank you a lot!